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I started the Random Word Connection challenge a week ago just wanting something creative to do. I have about 10 ideas but I always choose to start something new. I went away from my normal MO and just started writing to see where it would take me. I kept trying to keep it short and sweet...it ended up being a little under 3,000 words after it was all said and done.

What's funny is I couldn't wait for it to get done, but when the first draft was completed, I started to fall in love with it. I ran it though chatGPT as an editor and reader for content. I never have it change my words, just reading for consistency and suggestions to help me grow. I ended up doing this about 4 times until I got to the final product.

I made the ghost a side character but essential. Sunflowers were pretty important and the rain was a turning point in the story. I didn't have the creativity to think of different words but I liked being given words.

My imagination went into a black mirror land with magic which is probably the type of story-telling that stays with me. I guess I wanted that, but I always love twists. But I left it open to interpretation. Is the main character, Nate, cursed. Or did his wife, Molly, orchestrate everything? I leave that up to the reader to figure out. I like stories that allow the reader to make inferences like that. It's like Easter eggs for you to come back to, rather than having everything served to you. It also gives something for the writer to play around in the space with.

Anyway, I'm overall proud of this. I thought I was just excited for it to be done and go away. I'm surprised I ended up really loving it. Take a read, I really appreciate the feedback to grow:

https://open.substack.com/pub/laurenthebillings/p/the-man-who-watched?r=aexkl&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true

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